My integrated scheme

I have been working on a scheme which I hope to implement in a few primary schools in the near future, but I would like to get some feedback on it before I start. I have approached a few people for their opinions, but I thought I'd also post it here for discussion. I don't seem to be able to attach a pdf file though, so if anybody would be willing to give me comments or suggestions, get in touch by email and I will send you a copy. All criticism, positive or negative, will be appreciated.